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#1 Estrea

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Posted 25 May 2004 - 12:39 AM

I was really bored one day, so I decided to write the English version of the song Always. :o It took me several weeks due to me forgetting about it for a while, but I'm finally done! Try not to be too critical, its hard to try to make sure the english lyics flow as well as the korean words, and even tougher to make sure I didn't deviate TOO much from the original meaning...


English Version of Always

You were so cold
So far away, a lonely soul
Silence clouds your frame...
Why won't you say anything,
Why won't you speak up and tell me how you feel?
And stop making me wait in vain...

I weep for you, to try and let you hear me out,
But it is all in vain...
No matter what I do, no matter what I say will make no change
You won't ever come back to me...

There's no hope left, alone I weep,
I knew it would be like this but I still hoped...
I always have, I always will,
I love you, until the ends of time...I'll love you...

Now it's too late, you've opened the door and left me there,
Leaving my life like that...
Without a single glance behind, you have left me and I can't see you anymore
How I hate being alone...

There's no hope left, alone I weep,
I knew it would be like this but I still hoped...
I always have, I always will,
I love you, until the ends of time...
Just stay for once, just for a day,
Maybe for once I'll tell, the words in me,
How I do care, how I love you,
I'll tell all, just to prove my words: I love you...

Maybe one day out ahead,
You might still think of me now,
I'll wait here for you to come back, for you to find me....

Right now you're back, for that I'm glad,
I was so happy with you back, I wept again...
I love you so, I love you so...
Though it hurts, but there's no choice for me...
Farewell...


Well so how is it? I tried singing this lyrics, some parts were a bit rough but it will do if you match it up with the way BoA pronounces the korean words. :P I was counting the syllables most of the time...:P
Oh and I'm planning to tackle other songs, mostly ballads, and rewriting them to English. And I really really want to rewrite the english version of Listen to my Heart, the official one sucks, and it doesn't do the original japanese version any justice... :P
So what do you think? Should I try rewriting other songs into english? :o

#2 Queenie

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Posted 25 May 2004 - 01:07 PM

That seems good.
Damage, I've never heard this song.. :P

I'd like you rewrite Love & Honesty or Midnight Parade. :P

#3 Cori

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Posted 25 May 2004 - 02:39 PM

OOO I like that...but I've never heard the song, I still sang it how I wanted to and it came out prett well, i didn't recored it though :P

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Posted 25 May 2004 - 10:13 PM

credible

#5 Estrea

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Posted 25 May 2004 - 11:26 PM

None of you heard it yet? Very sad! It's a lovely sad song! :thumbsup: I would post up the link for anyone who wants it...

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Posted 26 May 2004 - 02:24 PM

YeAh yEaH!! Post it post it!! heheh.. :thumbsup:

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Posted 26 May 2004 - 02:57 PM

yes please do post the real song up. I recorded what I thought it went...if anyone wants to hear it ill post it

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Posted 27 May 2004 - 04:50 PM

nice!!! ur so good estrea! yea, some parts are rough, but it's alright. :thumbsup: nice job! =D

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Posted 27 May 2004 - 09:18 PM

wow! nice stuff!!  ^_^  :thumbsup:

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Posted 28 May 2004 - 12:57 PM

That was great  I loved it.
The bridge is a little rough though...
Other lyrics you should do that would be great:
Love & Honesty
Midnight Parade
Kiseki
Listen To My Heart
Time to begin
Atlantis Princess
Milky Way

#11 Scuz

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Posted 07 June 2004 - 07:53 AM

The lyrics are very nice ^_^

And I agree with Aaliyah Namie BoA Koda Hikki, you should def. write an English version of Atlantis Princess ;) Been meaning to do it myself, but I don't know, it just never happens. I suck at writing lyrics...

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Posted 08 June 2004 - 02:36 AM

hehe... tnx!!! :P

#13 Estrea

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Posted 08 June 2004 - 04:28 AM

Ok I'll work on Atlantis Princess, but bear in mind that it's gonna take a while, since sometimes it takes a little inspiration to get things going. :P

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Posted 08 June 2004 - 09:46 PM

wow koolz esty ur a lyric writer :P

well done  :P   but i hav neva heard that soing b4

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Posted 13 June 2004 - 04:58 PM

I'll test it out.   :D




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